Sweet. I like the way you handled his pants and boots ... really like it. I love his back, though something looks off to me in his left shoulder. Or perhaps it's his head. His face doesn't look long enough to me to have his chin poking over his shoulder, especially when his arm would be out from his body.
hmmm, I did do the chin over his shoulder, it looked fine to me, but maybe I didn't draw it big enough so it makes the arm look weird...I agree. I did have trouble drawing the arm in that pose I probably erased it 5 times thanks for the comment
I meant that his shoulder should hide his chin some. I can only get my chin over my shoulder (sorta) if I pull my arm across my body. In this shot you have the arm extended outward to his side, so even with the muzzle, I don't think it would extend over his shoulder. It just throws the perspective off to me. (yes ... I'm being completely anal ) If all else fails, I find mirrors helpful. Or just grab some poor sap and stick them into the pose you're having trouble with.